Star Wars Open World Round 1 (Fallout New Vegas Mod)
ErinNicoleLundquist for Marth Dia
Despite having a rough upbringing, she managed to find her footing in the tumultuous galaxy as a bounty hunter. Despite all the bloodshed, she's maintained a calm demeanor and a cold hearted nature. In addition to having a slightly rough and low voice, she has a cockney accent.
Record all audition lines while referring to the notes below for each line and do one take of each line.
For the first audition line, you start with a really cold and disinterested attitude towards a possible pickup artist before realizing that there may be more than meets the eye to this stranger. It seems like you both might be in the same line of work.
For the second audition line, you aren't at all pissed that your contract has been stolen since the world after all operates on a dog eat dog basis. In the pause before "changes", you smirk; the word also acts as a euphemism towards the republic rapidly becoming a dictatorship/empire.
For the third audition line, you find the naivety of the player character to the way bounty hunting relates to the recent regime change quite charming. You are quite comfortable with and smug about all the work rolling in.
Yea, I don't speak to strangers, kiddo. Unless you've got contracts or here to buy a girl a dri.... wait, that's a nice blaster... Where'd you get it?
So, you've taken my target? Can't say I'm not surprised, dirtbag had it coming and bounty hunting seems to be on an incline with the... changes, going on in the galaxy.
Heh, you new? The war is over and now we get the joy of hunting the prosecuted war criminals who survived it. Pretty high paying targets if you ask me.
A bit too calm and soft spoken of a performance. However, I do feel you got the attitude down.
Solid critique. Mind if I do I resubmission?
Heya, I shall leave that up to Logan. Please stay tuned.
Hey Erin, go ahead and submit another if you like. Your audio is clear, but try to add a bit more oomph in your delivery, like this character could knock your teeth out at any point if they wanted to. She's a little rough around the edges.
Thank you both for the feedback. I'll submit shortly.
The resubmission is posted as a separate audition. Thank you again.