RWBY Abridged Part 2
Satsumi for Nora Valkyrie
She will retain her hyperness with the crazy personality of a psychopath. As she gets crazy her only chains in the series will be Ren which has the emotion semblance so it makes sense why she feels calm around him. So you need to laugh like a serial killer scream like a maniac and lastly have a knack for improv line creating to add depth to her. I'll help of course.
(excited/jumpy) it's time... to kill… to feast… on sooouls
I can't wait to see all the bloodshed that will happen today. Well as long it doesn't include you. But you don't have to worry about me. I can handle myself. Although I knooow I'm not supposed to but I can't stop.
*Add crazy laughs screams and a bunch of psycho killer stuff the more the merrier.*
Okay so your voice is great your energy is amazing and how you lower it when she talks about Ren. Nice touch. The one thing I love the most was your first laugh oh man I freaking loved it it sounded so psychotic. I had to listen to it a couple times but the following after that decent however not terrible by any means. I guess you just set your own bar too high lol.
Rip XD
YAAY CONGRATS!!