RWBY Abridged Part 2
Rosellet for Nora Valkyrie
She will retain her hyperness with the crazy personality of a psychopath. As she gets crazy her only chains in the series will be Ren which has the emotion semblance so it makes sense why she feels calm around him. So you need to laugh like a serial killer scream like a maniac and lastly have a knack for improv line creating to add depth to her. I'll help of course.
(excited/jumpy) it's time... to kill… to feast… on sooouls
I can't wait to see all the bloodshed that will happen today. Well as long it doesn't include you. But you don't have to worry about me. I can handle myself. Although I knooow I'm not supposed to but I can't stop.
*Add crazy laughs screams and a bunch of psycho killer stuff the more the merrier.*
Hmm I like the voice and the energy you are putting onto Nora. But I think we can strive even better if you added more variation to your first line it basically sounded the same throughout. Plus the laughter was wonderful I really did love it but I want a bit more than laughing. If you want a reference I can record myself just comment or dm me if enough people bug me about it I'll do it.
Thank you so much for your feedback! I can definitely retry and give the first lines variation! And I guess besides laughter and screaming I am not quite sure what other serial killer type things you were searching for. Maybe like, screaming threats or more disturbing lines?
Hmm threats are a good one hmm let's see perhaps the sound of licking your lips as if you are craving blood I'll do an audition tomorrow maybe that can give you some ideas