RWBY Abridged Part 2
Vyn Vox for Nora Valkyrie
She will retain her hyperness with the crazy personality of a psychopath. As she gets crazy her only chains in the series will be Ren which has the emotion semblance so it makes sense why she feels calm around him. So you need to laugh like a serial killer scream like a maniac and lastly have a knack for improv line creating to add depth to her. I'll help of course.
(excited/jumpy) it's time... to kill… to feast… on sooouls
I can't wait to see all the bloodshed that will happen today. Well as long it doesn't include you. But you don't have to worry about me. I can handle myself. Although I knooow I'm not supposed to but I can't stop.
*Add crazy laughs screams and a bunch of psycho killer stuff the more the merrier.*
Okay voice was good energy was almost there just needed that extra push to reach it. Other than that your laughter in the end sounded as you had your mouth closed and sounded muffled. It wasn't bad don't get me wrong but I want to hear a big one too for good measure. Just saying :)
Thank you for the feedback! Should I resubmit?
Yes you can resubmit by all means just say it's your second one so I don't use your old one as your real audition