[CLOSED] Fallout: New Vegas Redesigned
perbvoice for The Crucified Slave (This is a paid role $)
Payment: $30 for the chosen audition for the crucified slave
(The audition is the final version. No additional lines are needed)
Brackets represents a pause.
Preference:
I’d prefer if the character is older, around 55-60 years old but I have now removed the age requirement.
You don't have to follow the script verbatim. Do what feels most natural to you. I basically wrote brackets to indicate pauses as too many pauses or too much blank space between words confuses the game engine and its ability to lipsync.
*****Brackets represents a pause but you don't have to follow the script verbatim*******
Preference:
I’d prefer if the character is older, around 55-60 years old but I have now removed the age
requirement.
(The Courier will walk towards the Fort and a crucified man will speak to him or her)
Line 1: (in severe pain) (Should sound weak, tired, hungry, thirsty, in extreme pain)
(should sound weak but loud enough I can hear it, like someone drowning in water, yelling for help)
[Please!….Come here. Please..I beg you….]
(The courier walks towards the crucified man)
[I…I..don’t have much time left.](snifels) (runny nose) [I know…(winces)…I know I’m going to die here (swallows)]
[.I...I want you....to deliver something for me] (snifels)
(verge of tears)(weakly)
[My daughter….we….we… never abandoned her] (Grief)
(tears through eyes)
[She ..she needs to know...She…she..doesn't know.] (Grief)
(snifels) (cries lightly) [They killed my wife] (tears) (crying lightly) (COMPOSURE BREAK)
[Her body is here….. near the Bramin (Braw-men) pen] (Crying through words)
[This is where they keep the dead] (snifels) (Crying through words)
[She had a wooden necklace. The Legion didn’t take it ] (Crying through words)
[Please.]
(less crying but remnants remain, sniffling, runny nose) [Give this …give this necklace..to my daughter. She lives in Aerotech….She’ll know who it’s from]
[Tell her…..tell her that we love her very much]<=========this line has to move people
(weakly)
[Thank you…]<=====Grateful and crying
(weakly)
[Her name is Sarah]<=====Sadness when he mentions her name
Take #2. Will try again if needed. i would like to nail this!
Man...so your voice-acting sounds very realistic but....it's......hard to explain...it's...too dark...He reminds me too much of Zszazz (a great voice actor) btw.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=el_Nr7EVf5g
So I'll clarify since my last comment probably doesn't give much detail. So the first line "Come here traveler" from your rendition is something that seems to fit more for a Jet addict or someone unwell...there's something unsettling about the tone and the voice. It's incredible acting for sure...but something suited for a different character. So let's change the scenario. Imagine the man is about 50-60 years old, he's a bit stout, has a scruffy beard, has sort of a deep voice...he needs to sound like he could be the father...of the voice actress who won Sarah's role, Hyperi0n.