[CLOSED] Fallout: New Vegas Redesigned
drfacedoctor for The Courier (This is a paid role $)
Payment: $15 for the chosen audition
This is a man you will encounter in a bar. I'd ideally like his voice to sound grizzled and war-torn. He's one of the other six couriers.
Line 1: Leave me alone. This bottle……is my best friend, and we have some catching up to do...
Line 2: Wait!........... Hold on a second!.........(squints eyes) I know you. You worked for Nash, down in Primm!
Line 3 It is you! You were one of us couriers selected for that job
Line 4 (The Player reveals a bullet wound along with lacerations and stitches) SHIT! They really did a number on your head, didn’t they? Heard about that on the radio... That’s a hell of a scar you got there
Line 5
I tell you what, that job wasn't worth the money. They didn't give us shit. I should have just walked away...
Nobody, and I mean fucking nobody comes back the same...
I like this one but I'd like it to be less light-hearted. I'd like him to have the tone in your first line. I want it to be set up so that it's implied but not directly stated that his time as a Courier affected his life in a negative way. Hence the drinking. Second, he seems overly cordial with the Player. I'd like it more as a nod of recognition..but not necessarily..old-time friends. Third, I'd like to see if you can make his acknowledgement of the Player, gender-neutral, because the Player could also be a girl too. I mean I suppose that's fine and all but the dialogue of "Hey bro" to a female Player may give the impression that it should be a guy instead. Overall I think you've got the voice and acting pat-down. I just would like to change the setting. Similar to the tone of your guy in the 188 drunk rendition.