The Girl Named Parker
mrpufftin for Max Green
Line Count:
Lines 344, including 15 Monologues
Characteristics:
Max is know as a worrywart, and he is at times, but he is also caring and sweet. Max tends to pay attention to the little details and think of them as big problems but at the same time caring about what the other people are thinking or going through. He isn't a push over and does hold grudges, for a long time. One thing is is that he self pities too much at times, and is willing to give in or up at the lip of a hat
Voice Notes:
He is a young 18-19 year old, who has a medium to high raged voice, only being slightly higher then normal but it is a little bit of a softer one
Other:
He is best friend with Sage, but over time he loses that friendship. He has a crush on Parker, and is friends with Alex.
(Worried, Panicking)
You sure? You don’t want to forget something, then have to come all the way back here to get it. Like your favorite shirt.
(Moderate Monologue, Awestruck, Intrigued)
That girl, she was so… Bright, her dirty blond hair sitting on her shoulder, her outfit was eye-catching, like thousands of paints being splattered across her clothes in a messy but beautiful way. It was like she did care what others thought, I wish I could be like that. Just let other people’s words roll off. I only saw her for a second but I just wish I could talk to her, meet her. That would be amazing, but how would I? Would I accidentally run into her, or see her at a party. Oh! Maybe she goes to the same university! I wonder what she’s like!
(Frustrated, Angry, Upset, Defensive, Picking a fight)
(Moderately Loud)
Look. I don’t want to talk to you either, you tainted snow. But I have a bone to pick with you!
Would you like me to give you feedback on your acting?
It would help me greatly to know how I should perform in the future. Yes please. I'd really appreciate your help.
you need to work on rate. Part of the first line very repetitive having the same spacing and extradition. You need to change things up, it needs to be able to flow. You aren't going to say a sentience and have every word sound similar you're going to say each word differently, you know?