Tortured Heart- Marvel Fanfiction Reading
vlaurent for Narrator
Narration needs to be clearly enunciated and not rushed.
Loki, the Trickster, God of Mischief, God of Lies, the fire, the entropy, opened his eyes. He was lying on hard stone, still chained and gagged. He hoisted himself up and looked around.
This was a stone hall, obviously underground. Dimly lit by torchlight, it had the atmosphere of a tomb. On one end stood two huge iron doors. On the other was a dais, upon which sat a fur-covered stone throne. Braziers rested on either side of the seat, and behind it, carved into the stone, was a crest. Loki's heart stopped. He knew that crest. It was the mark of… Amora.
A low chuckle echoed through the hall. From the shadows stepped a woman. Blond, thin, dressed in grass green, and wearing a silver headpiece bearing the crest on the wall, she appeared by no means dangerous. The glint in her eyes suggested otherwise.
I do like your timber. The delivery has actually ended up a bit too slow, but shortening the pauses in my DAW didn't create a jarring effect. Great job with consistency there!
Thanks. I'm just glad to read something serious but also fun. And my apologies for not stating my name in the demo
I'm so glad you find this fun! It's alright that you didn't slate yourself, I should have been more clear about asking for it.