[CLOSED] A unique audition ($150)
Reaperesque for A unique audition
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(Act only the ones which you feel comfortable acting)
ANGER:
(yelling) I told you to leave this room!! Why are you still here?!!!!(Brooding not yelling) Who the fuck do you think you are?
HAPPINESS:
(laughing) (won jackpot)I can’t believe it!! 15. It was 15! I can’t believe it!!!
SADNESS:
(Crying) She said she'd be here. Why didn't she come?
TRAUMA:
(Crying) (Sniffling) (talking of something horrible)… …..I thought I could trust (him/her)…..(crying)…..I can’t believe I was so stupid…..(crying)…….
FAKE HAPPINESS and AWKWARDNESS
(You see a person that you really care about who is now with someone else)(Breaks your heart)
I......you look so happy (awkward laugh)...I'm uh.......(awkward laugh)....I'm happy you're together (fake happy but comes off more as sad) Well...(looks at watch)...I gotta get going (awkward laugh)..(voice cracks slightly)...Let's keep in touch okay (walks away sadly)
FRUSTRATIONNo. No. NO! NO! Turn the other way! Turn the other way!!! You're going the wrong way!!!!
LOVEYou make me so happy....I'm the luckiest (guy/girl) in the world.
LIMERENCE AND UNREQUITED LOVEShe's the perfect girl for me. She's funny. She's smart. I'd never get a girl like her.
MOMENTOUS
There’s……there’s something I need to tell you....(breathes out)..... Something I should have told you a long time ago.
THANKFUL (Someone saves your life)
(frantic) Thank you so much!! Thank you so much!!.....If it wasn’t for you…I wouldn’t be here.THANKFUL (a gift at a wedding) (formal event) (speaking to a stranger, not a friend)
Thank you so much for the gift!!! (kind smile) We're all glad you guys came.
FRIGHT
Please!!!!!!!! Get me out of here!!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fright II: (You see a pale eyeless face appear from the darkness)Oh my God! What is that?!!!!.......(you recognize her).... Clarissa! (shivering) is that you?!!
SOLDIER
(Soldier with sniper) (Ready to pull trigger on target)Sir, I'm taking the shot. Tango down.
(Soldier) (Fellow soldier injured or dead)
Man down!!!!! I repeat!!!! MAN DOWN!!!!!!
NEAR DEATH
It’s…it’s there. I'm giving this to you.... Take it to Elisa...
DEAD INSIDE, CHECKED OUT
(Sad voice, blank stare)-No. I…..have to stay here. I'm happy here. My master treats me well.
INTERROGATION(Cold) (doesn’t raise his voice) (intimidating)
Where did you hide the papers? I will not ask a second time.
SEDUCTIVE (teasing) (optional)
Come over here.............Come here.............. I can give you a *really* good time.
Ok, so first of all, I wanted to say that I'm actually a big fan of your work. I've actually followed you even before this project. If I may offer constructive feedback, here are my thoughts. I would try to cut down on takes to 2 ideally and 3 maximum. If it's a difficult line or you're uncertain as to what the director wants, then it's fine to add as much as you need. And it's always appreciated to have more takes when you send the final lines as a final product...but not so much for an audition. In an audition, your objective is to make a statement and provide impact immediately and quickly. Think of it as a resume, if you will. Something that makes an impact quickly. You never go past one or two pages on a resume. Even though you may want to list all your accolades and a have a 7 page resume, a company only has time to go through the first page. Bad analogy but I hope you understand. Or think of a product feature of a new product. You want to keep what's great about it, short, concise, to the point and where people will see what they want to see. Or if it's a Youtube video, short, concise and to the point. In summation, gather your best lines and narrow it down to your 2 best takes. I would say on your own terms, record as many lines as you feel comfortable with and then you choose the top 2 for each line, etc. I just found myself hearing the same lines repeated over and over, etc (First line had 6 takes and it was hard to move past that)
I see, thank you! I understand now, will definitely keep that in mind. I'm glad that you're a fan of my work though! Hopefully I'll be able to work with you on one of your projects sometime!