[CLOSED] A unique audition ($150)
unltimateQWERTY for A unique audition
Total words: 252
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(Act only the ones which you feel comfortable acting)
ANGER:
(yelling) I told you to leave this room!! Why are you still here?!!!!(Brooding not yelling) Who the fuck do you think you are?
HAPPINESS:
(laughing) (won jackpot)I can’t believe it!! 15. It was 15! I can’t believe it!!!
SADNESS:
(Crying) She said she'd be here. Why didn't she come?
TRAUMA:
(Crying) (Sniffling) (talking of something horrible)… …..I thought I could trust (him/her)…..(crying)…..I can’t believe I was so stupid…..(crying)…….
FAKE HAPPINESS and AWKWARDNESS
(You see a person that you really care about who is now with someone else)(Breaks your heart)
I......you look so happy (awkward laugh)...I'm uh.......(awkward laugh)....I'm happy you're together (fake happy but comes off more as sad) Well...(looks at watch)...I gotta get going (awkward laugh)..(voice cracks slightly)...Let's keep in touch okay (walks away sadly)
FRUSTRATIONNo. No. NO! NO! Turn the other way! Turn the other way!!! You're going the wrong way!!!!
LOVEYou make me so happy....I'm the luckiest (guy/girl) in the world.
LIMERENCE AND UNREQUITED LOVEShe's the perfect girl for me. She's funny. She's smart. I'd never get a girl like her.
MOMENTOUS
There’s……there’s something I need to tell you....(breathes out)..... Something I should have told you a long time ago.
THANKFUL (Someone saves your life)
(frantic) Thank you so much!! Thank you so much!!.....If it wasn’t for you…I wouldn’t be here.THANKFUL (a gift at a wedding) (formal event) (speaking to a stranger, not a friend)
Thank you so much for the gift!!! (kind smile) We're all glad you guys came.
FRIGHT
Please!!!!!!!! Get me out of here!!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fright II: (You see a pale eyeless face appear from the darkness)Oh my God! What is that?!!!!.......(you recognize her).... Clarissa! (shivering) is that you?!!
SOLDIER
(Soldier with sniper) (Ready to pull trigger on target)Sir, I'm taking the shot. Tango down.
(Soldier) (Fellow soldier injured or dead)
Man down!!!!! I repeat!!!! MAN DOWN!!!!!!
NEAR DEATH
It’s…it’s there. I'm giving this to you.... Take it to Elisa...
DEAD INSIDE, CHECKED OUT
(Sad voice, blank stare)-No. I…..have to stay here. I'm happy here. My master treats me well.
INTERROGATION(Cold) (doesn’t raise his voice) (intimidating)
Where did you hide the papers? I will not ask a second time.
SEDUCTIVE (teasing) (optional)
Come over here.............Come here.............. I can give you a *really* good time.
Hi there. Wanted to give you some feedback on your audition. First off, I thought you did an amazing job in portraying ANGER BROODING HAPPINESS SADNESS TRAUMA FRUSTRATION and MOMENTOUS. Those emotions were fantastic. I think when you did the audition, you were one of the earlier participants so some of the older lines were in the audition. I've since removed them out and made some of them optional. As an example, I made SEDUCTION an optional set of lines. The lines for SEDUCTION require a particular range, something a bit closer to Mezzo-Soprano or Contralto. An example of an actress here who did that line perfectly would be natskilou. I think on your line when you did "Luckiest person in the world" it shows me that you didn't edit your lines. I would have ideally liked a better take of that where there wasn't hesitation. It sounded like you acted it and you realized there was a mistake but you kept going. I would have preferred it if you gave the best take of that line instead. However, the acting was still done well on there. I think your FRIGHT line was almost amazing. I think what happened was that you were with a friend and she was hearing you while you were voice-acting and as she heard your lines, she made you laugh. I would have much preferred that line where you acted it with no outside influence. I think having that distraction there affected your performance but again, from what I could hear, you can clearly act. The other thing I wanted to mention as well was regarding the AWKWARD DINNER SCENE and LIMERENCE. So it's hard for me to explain but I feel that with some of these lines, you really can't act them unless you've been through it. Overall, I thought you did a great job. I just feel that with each take, you should try to edit out whatever you feel doesn't fit and to go over the lines with your best performance and to remove any distractions out of your way. That being said, I think you can definitely act. I think you are definitely talented and from watching all of your past auditions, I can tell that you are passionate about acting and love acting.