I have to be honest, this was not a strong audition. There was some background noise throughout, and you stumbled once or twice. I kinda got the impression you only read the lines once before recording. I'm not picking on you, but there are a few things I want you to keep in mind: Firstly, you need a good recording space. I get that that's not always easy, but sometimes you need to improvise. I record in my closet under a blanket, for instance. Second, you need to put everything you've got into an audition. Most of the time you record as a voice actor will be spent auditioning. It's all about the grind to get a role. Your goal is to make the director believe that you don't just want that character, but you ARE that character. I don't expect perfection from anyone, but fouling a line doesn't send a good message if you leave it in an audition. There are ways to incorporate a stutter or pause into a performance, but to me it sounded like you misread. A lot of people will hear that and think that if you don't bother to re-record mistakes, then you must not care. That can really harm your chances of finding roles and networking with people. Again, I am not trying to be mean. I'm more lenient about these sorts of things, I just want you to learn from it and improve as you go on.