Lustrias- an episodic fantasy audio drama and visual novel!
RMP321 for Leonardo
Leonardo:
(Relieved) *sighes* I'm relieved that you're safe Anna. I feared the worst for you and the others. (Serious tone, protective) They're here, whatever you do, don't .... move.
(Being gracious) Thank you my lady, I haven't had a home cooked meal in a long time. *sniffs the air* I smell something really good, smells like a cake.
(Attacking an enemy) EyahhhhhhhhhHHHHHHHHHH!!!! (Screams) Get out of here! RUN!! (Angry) You'll never touch them, you will be dead before the hat hits the ground. (Slashing with claws) Hyah! Hyah! Errrrrrrrahhh! *growls* (Screams in pain) AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
i would love some feedback on the voice! i can go deeper with it as well if you think that might fit the character more!
Thank you for auditioning RMP321. We love what you did for Leo. The overall tone and pitch was right for him. However, we thought that your delivery of the final line was a bit lacking substance and intensity. If you want to reaudition and try improving the last line that would be great. :)
yup i would be sure to give it a go!