My Hero Academia: Vigilantes Fun Dub
Dattop for Soga Kugizaki
Soga has a cruel and violent personality, he likes to humiliate and attack people. This stems from the fact that he has been discriminated against due to his actions and his Quirk. He seems to think that everyone around him sees him as some sort of monster, and has developed a love of making other people suffer in place of him due to these circumstances.
He shows some signs of mental instability, as shown when he sees everyone around him with a mocking, condescending smile, and laughing at him, no matter who they are and what they are actually doing, suggesting he is unable to separate reality from his perception of the world. It is suggested that this perception of the world is what makes him so violent.
In spite of these flaws, he shows solidarity with his friends, who are other people who have been looked down on due to their Quirks. He shows a strong sense of loyalty and care towards them.
(Mocking/Cruel) Hmm? Look What You've Done, Buddy. Made Me Spill This Drink I Just Bought... Apologize... On Your Knees.
(Frustrated/Lamenting) Damn That Cock-Roach Bastard. He's Dead Meat When I Find Him!
(Sadistic/Cruel) That Does it. You Ain't Getting Away With Just A Beating. We're Gonna Crush You And That Store Of Yours!! Then That Little Skank Is Gonna Show Off All Her Good To The World!! After We Have Our Way With Her!! This Is All Happening Because You Had To Go And Piss Me Off!!
i like it, your tone was good through out. but i think there are a few areas that need work on delivery. in line 1 "On Your Knees" should be a little more suggestive instead of demanding. in line two, although the final part does not need to be yelled. and the last line was pretty much perfect!