Absolutely! I noticed that when you were singing this phrase "sono mujaki sa wa", there was a awkward "push" on the notes on the word "sono" and "sa wa". It sounds like you were looking at something disgusting if I had to put it to words. It happened also during this phrase "Miteru hou ga iraira shimasu" during the word "iraira". The word "Kauntodaun" felt quite unnatural too. There was a slight timing error when transitioning to the word "Senpai". When I tap my foot and sing along I can notice the slight timing error, but it may not be noticeable here, but in a mix it'd be very obvious! There was also an energy loss too at the word "waratte" and it felt very rushed when it was said. I think a better way of describing the "push" is that some notes were unbalanced. Some had more energy (possibly too much) and some had less energy so it was a bit unbalanced. I'm not Japanese myself, but I've listened to the vocal cover video (up above) probably about 200 times now and I try to compare the audition to that one (just for smoothness and making sure the auditions are on-key, the girl in the video is very professional and the original cover video has 800k views, so I don't put my audition standards to her level!). Again I'm far from a vocalist critiquer (I don't think this is a word xD), so I can only express it in some weird wording. It's like I'm trying to describe what chocolate taste like, so I probably sound kind of vague! I'm still a developing musician (hobby), so you should take my own critique with a grain of salt! I'm actually fairly sleepy right and this small chat box that I'm typing in isn't helping me keep track of what I said since I can only see 3 lines text, so I hope I typed everything understandable.