WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
Jeromy for Bedman
A hyper intelligent young man that is held to strange bed that records and amplifies his REM sleep. Not much is known about Bedman, besides that he's currently under the thumb of a client that wishes certain events to unfold, something Bedman neither cares nor dignifies; only seeking to observe and record the data.
While Bedman is asleep at all points, his dreams and waking nightmares depict him as a fast talker, and a logically sociopathic person that only cares for an outcome rather than the means of achieving it. Whatever Bedman's real goals are, they are something probably best left out of sound minds.
Voice Type: Medium, Medium-High; Critical, and without remorse, though not completely emotionless. (Be ready to talk VERY fast)
(Theatre of Pain - Intro) Hm.
(Theater of Pain - Narrative) Show me your past...that oh-so tragic past.
(Theater of Pain - Bad End) If getting up after a fall and trying again was really all it would take to win, then we would all be winners now wouldn't we? [Must all be said within 4 seconds]
I wish you would give me more than just one take on these lines because your pitch and delivery is quite good for Bedman. There is a suitable air of knowledge and experience behind your voice, which is contradictory and suitable to Bedman's age, perfectly in line with the character. Tone-wise, there is a slight issue of emoting that could be improved upon for this one, as you're giving a bit too much interest for the middle line, yet come off as detached for the second line. Retain the tonal consistency for the third line, and this should improve significantly.
Thanks for the feedback! It's much appreciated. I'm not sure why I didn't include multiple takes, I plan on re-auditioning to address this.