[PAID] Khajiit Will Follow -- Skyrim Follower Mod Quest NPC
DatGuyYouKnow for Wikky - Male Khajiit
Character Bio:
Wikky is a khajiit treasure hunter with a thirst for shiny things. He's a bit exciteable, with a bright, light personality, and is a good person overall. He is the last surviving member of a crypt-diving group of treasure hunters who got in *just a bit* over their heads on one of their first expeditions.
The player finds him deep in an undead crypt, all alone, and can take him along with them through the rest of the dungeon. Having seen his friends/fellow treasure hunters die to various traps in the crypt, he is slightly traumatized and eager to get out of the crypt in one piece. He's nervous about what’s going to come shambling out of the dark at him, but he also feels a bit safer once he's at the player's side.
For the audition lines below, a khajiit accent is required. Script direction is included in [brackets].
Full script is available here:
- male adult
- generic russian
- khajiit
[Wikky is jump-scared and cowers as the player first approaches him out of the dark] Ahhh!!! Don’t kill me! [uncowers, turning to player with a bit of relief] …Oh… You’re not one of them. Thank goodness. …At least, you don’t look like a draugr.
[player asks Wikky to tell them about his friends] My friends? I’m still kind of in shock that they’re…gone. Hard to even say it. Ahn-drei and me, we were like brothers. Nicest argonian you’ll meet this side of Black Marsh. And Skai, he was like a father to me. Riif was a little…eccentric, but I loved him for it. …I’m gonna miss them.
[combat taunt -- high energy, as angry and mean as possible] Gonna knock the rest of your teeth out! [swings sword] *attacking grunt*
Solid first attempt! I think you've got a good foundation to build off of. Main points of feedback, if you're interested: Try to let your reads breathe a little bit. Slow it down and let your phrases connect a bit more so that your reads aren't quite so herky-jerky. For combat/yells, really turn it up to 11 and exaggerate your emotion. Find the energy first and then hone it. Thanks for auditioning! Hope you stick with it and keep practicing.
Thank you so much! The feedback is invaluable - I was definitely rushing it, and it came out a little disjointed, but I'll definitely let loose next time and not wait until the last day out of nervousness, haha. Thank you for listening, and thank you for your mod! I always make sure to pick up Ma'Kara for a time when im heading to Riften to get Inigo :)