NORMAL (an original comic voiceover)
ScottStofko for Narrator
The Narrator calls it like they see it. They know more than you and want to help the reader along through this strange adventure. Don't be bland, have fun with it! The narrator may not be in the comic, but they're vital to telling the story and a big source of the comedic effect of the comic
It seems you are in a peculiar predicament here, seeing as how just moments ago, this spud did not exist
You turn and see your can of "dRank" that you consumed a few minutes ago. A very ominous can.You're not quite sure why you drank it
The can of dRank watches as you ingest the potato like an animal. You don't notice the inanimate object and continue your supernatural snack.
Thank you so much for you audition! Aside from some slight issues with audio quality and the clicking noises in the beginning, this was a pretty decent audition. I really enjoy how you weren't afraid to sound a little silly. "Suuuuuupernaturaaaaaal snack" actually made me chuckle a bit. A future audition might have some clearing enunciation on some words, and reevaluate some of the lines to serve the jokes. Almost every line the narrator has contains some humor, and the best direction to go would be serving that humor. Thank you so much!
Once again, Thanks for the feedback. It's nice to see that you are investing and critiquing as many of these auditions as possible. I am uploading a 2nd take... taken a few liberties and definitely went a little overboard on the silliness.
"taken a few liberties and definitely went a little overboard on the silliness." wouldn't have had it any other way!