WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
allen the ultimate gamer for Raven
A long-time servant of 'That Man', Raven is an immortal ex-soldier that ceased to age at the moment of his first death in the medieval battlefields of Germany. Having lived for more time than even he can remember, Raven had grown bored of the world's physical values and secluded himself in boredom and grief until 'That Man' gave him a new purpose.
Raven is a calm, polite, and somewhat eloquent to those he's holding a conversation with. Yet beneath this is a penchant for masochism that borders on psychosis, as Raven's body will continue to revive even if he's turned to ashes, seeking to feel joy in pain to once again feel alive.
Voice: Low, Medium-Low; Calm, and quiet talker, but can switch to psychotic masochist in a second.
(Getreuer) Here's one for you. (Attack Connects) DIE!
(Verzweifelt) Let's go. (Attack Connects) Desperate Flight!
(Sehnsucht) Let's enjoy our time together. (Attack Connects) What curiosity is in your eyes...? (Attack Finishes) Hehehehe...
I feel like I shouldn't recommend this one, as the first portion of your lines are not quite to where I need them to be in terms of tone or pitch but the other portions of your lines are done incredibly well. This is gonna be a rare case where balance may be playing against you, as the tone for Raven needs to be a respectful and low voice to start and end with his crazy, shouting. You have the latter down, but you need to better suit your voice for the former. Another thing I keep noticing is that you're fairly consistent throughout your auditions, and this one is no different.