WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
allen the ultimate gamer for Answer
Answer is known by the names of 'Human Library', 'Chief of Staff', and 'Business Ninja', yet his own real identity is to be the right hand man of Chipp Zanuff. Having been blessed with preternatural memory, Answer is literally a moving database, as he's not only able to store massive amounts of data but also quickly acquire it.
Answer is as diligent and as work-savvy as any presidential staff today, with the added benefit of him being a ninja. His dedication to Chipp, and a preset weekly schedule of business meetings and seminars, makes him one of the most dutiful members on Chipp's cabinet.
Voice: Medium; Work oriented, official, and professional even in battle. (Be ready to talk REALLY fast.)
(Dead Stock Ninpo: Firesale) Here's my card. (Attack Connects) And about 9 more!
(Business Ultimate Ninpo: All Hands) Overtime, prepaid! (Attack Connects) Make your quota!
(Summoner: The Basilisk) Time to make room in our workday. (Attack Connects) Come forth! (Attack Finishes) I hope you will understand.
Your pitch is fine, but there's a youth to your voice that feels out of place for Answer. This is another case of your aggression being played too hard here as well, as the amount of power you're giving your lines seems excessive to a character that is otherwise professional in tone. Besides this, your delivery could be balanced a bit in terms of speed as it is somewhat inconsistent within your first and second lines.
Those are fair points, I might try and reaudition to iron out these issues.