WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
allen the ultimate gamer for Venom
The current active leader of the Assassin's Guild, and Zato's former apprentice, Venom is a master strategist and magic user, specializing in a strange method of assassination through billiard mathematics and a deadly pool cue. Having once sworn loyalty to Zato, Venom ultimately saw the wrongdoings of the guild and now seeks to undo their ambitions from within.
Peace of mind and a logical demeanor are traits to describe Venom, though he ultimately understands the importance of morality and empathy when dealing with people. Venom is a paradox of an assassin, as both his fighting style and personality clash heavily with his profession, yet his powerful mind and magic ultimately make up for it in spades.
Voice Type: Medium, Medium Low; Honest, thoughtful and very to the point in speaking
(Dark Angel) I've wasted too much time. (Attack Connects) Dark Angel!
(Red Hail) Overhead. (Attack Connects) Red Hail!
(Giga Machina System) Deep level requiem. (Attack Connects) The Seventh Pocket.(After Attack) Giga Machina System!
Pitch needs to be a bit lower on this one, as Venom's subtle and calculating voice is carried by both his tone as well as his age. Your tone here is actually fine, as I did enjoy the more sinister angle you gave him throughout. Again though, we're having an issue with the amount of aggression you're putting in your voice, as it there's just too much especially in the last line. Improve on your control and pitch for this one.
Thank you once again for your helpful feedback, I'll make sure to provide a lower pitch and a toned down level of aggression for Venom, but like before glad you enjoyed some parts of it :)