WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
allen the ultimate gamer for Ky Kiske
Former crusader commander and one of the people responsible for saving humanity from the gears during the war. Following the events of Guilty Gear XX, Ky sired the half gear Sin from his lover Dizzy, a fact that has placed him in a difficult position as the current king of Illyria.
Ky is a man of principle and duty, adhering heavily to his sense of justice and religious devotion; traits that put him at odds with his choices of being with Dizzy and letting go of his past hatred for Sol. Whether on the battlefield or in his throne, Ky is a man that does not relent with the same determination he ended the war with.
Voice: Medium, Medium High; Polite, and resolute.
(Sacred Edge) Gather. (Attack Connects) Sacred Edge!
(Ride the Lightning) My aim is true! (Attack Connects) Ride the Lightning!
(Rising Force) This is everything I have! (Attack Connects) They are modest to greed, generous to the truth of the world. When the heart is peaceful the seven seas cry! (Attack Finishes) Rising Force!
Good attempt on Ky's voice, your pitch in particular is well handled; not too high or low. Tone however needs to be cooled off a little, as there is perhaps too much aggression behind your lines and not enough of a balance with determination or honor. This is unfortunately true in the last part, as you're putting too much emphasis on your power to carry the lines. Restraint is the key word here.
Thank you for the feedback, I'll definitely reaudition and try and restrain the level of aggression I put into the lines.