WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
wungobongova for Raven
A long-time servant of 'That Man', Raven is an immortal ex-soldier that ceased to age at the moment of his first death in the medieval battlefields of Germany. Having lived for more time than even he can remember, Raven had grown bored of the world's physical values and secluded himself in boredom and grief until 'That Man' gave him a new purpose.
Raven is a calm, polite, and somewhat eloquent to those he's holding a conversation with. Yet beneath this is a penchant for masochism that borders on psychosis, as Raven's body will continue to revive even if he's turned to ashes, seeking to feel joy in pain to once again feel alive.
Voice: Low, Medium-Low; Calm, and quiet talker, but can switch to psychotic masochist in a second.
(Getreuer) Here's one for you. (Attack Connects) DIE!
(Verzweifelt) Let's go. (Attack Connects) Desperate Flight!
(Sehnsucht) Let's enjoy our time together. (Attack Connects) What curiosity is in your eyes...? (Attack Finishes) Hehehehe...
I favor your first attempt for all of your lines, as I feel that they are the sharpest contrast between calm and collect to loud and psychotic. With that being said, the tone you set up for Raven is interesting as it appropriately serves both sides of his personality with your low, haunting pitch that aids in how messed in the head Raven really is. This comes to a head in your last line, where the tone is set to a dreadful end. No real complaints on this one, as I feel it close to perfect to where we need Raven to be.