WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
wungobongova for Kum Haehyun
The man you see before you is not a man, but young woman in the robotic guise of the old head of her family, though not everyone in Haehyun's family knows that. The descendant of a long line of tuners, Haehyun is currently one of the few wielders of ki in the world, as well as a natural actress.
Kum Haehyun could be considered wise beyond her years, as her own powers, coupled with her robotic form, have given her a natural world view of a gray scale morality. When in the guise of Jun Ryu Kum, the old head of her family, she puts on an air of noble, self-aggrandizement, complete with pretentious quotes.
Voice: Low; Old master tone with powerful shouts.
(Enlightened 3000 Palm Strike) 3000 Palms.(Attack Connects) Strike as one!
(Celestial Tuning Ball) Huuaaah! (Attack Connects) Come Forth! Ki Energy!
(Sundering Chord) Ready to show me your best? (Attack Connects) I doubt you can even stand...Remaining conscious is about all you can muster. But do not fret.(Attack Finishes) This is normal.
This one is close to being great except for one complaint. Your pitch and tone are complimentary here, as they give a sense of overwhelming power and wisdom as Haehyun should project. From this, I can also say that the delivery is well executed in giving us a solid speed and emotional range here, though this ties into that one complaint. Your last line is perhaps too aggressive in tone, as it should be more of an overwhelming force overtaking a small object in terms of tonal shift; the same way a person looks at an ant.