I don't think you'll suit this part, but you took the time to audition, so I'll take the time to respond. First, Australian security officers must be 18, and this is American, so I think the age over there is 21. So you have to sound 21. That's fine, you can do that by deepening your voice. The pause between "code red" and "dance floor" feels a bit off. I can't figure out why you paused there. I don't think it's your reading speed, because you delivered the rest of the line quite fast. Speed-wise, it was perfect. However, the emotion just wasn't there. "Patron has punched a woman in the face" usually has some anger, fear, excitement, or SOMETHING. I couldn't hear any of it. Even if you fix all of that, I'm trying to get 6 male guards, and some of these roles don't even have males auditioning yet. So even if you do the best take ever, you'll still probably lose to Chris Brady, just because I need more male voices. That said, you're only 14 and you're doing well. By the time you're 18, you could be making a bit of money off of this. Keep it up.