Project: Blacklist
Lycan for Karl "Baron" Smit
In-game bio:
This flake calls himself "Baron." He's a rich guy from the coast. He thinks garage custom is an excuse for being broke. As far as he's concerned, "if it's not brand, it's nothing." Go show 'im what home-grown rides can do.
Baron is a Snob from the Coast that has an allergy against Shirts for under 100 dollar. Dude is a massive Sunnyboy that attracts the special kind of woman that wants to marry a wallet with a Guy attached. His voice should reflect his luxury lifestyle and general expectation towards Life to treat him like upper class. Also he talks down to everyone under his general payclass. Probably has Dutch ancestors somewhere.
- male adult
[Thinks of himself as a significantly higher species than the Protag] You’re just a kid from the Streets. And I’ll make sure you stay there.
[Kinda preachy and talking down, like the other person is a retard.] In this World you don’t get Safety, you have to place Bets.
[Annoyed and impressed at the same time.] Not too shabby for a broke bitch. Lets see what your Tunacan on wheels can do.
Hey, hi thank you so much for Auditioning to my Project!So, first of all, I feel you did VERY well, for the entirely wrong reasons. And that is because you NAIL the vibe of an arrogant A-hole really looking down on anyone in a T-shirt under 150 bucks MSRP, but you are putting it on too thicc. xD You would crush the Role of a Fantasy Nobleman any day with that delivery, but baron is essentially a rich dick that has a severe issue with Privledge checking. xDThere is a "commonality" to him handling huge sums of money to elevate his shallow personality that exceeds just being a snob. he really DOES think he is better than you. Your delivery was not "eased" into it enough if that makes any sense. Also, and that is important to note for every role: Situational awareness. Consider that Baron is a streetracer. a snob, yes, but also an highly illegal, constantly in the underworld person that will have an aura of this sort that will naturally reflect on the Voice. For the first line for example, it can sound more threatening in a way that you can HEAR he does not care about anyones misery - cause its not his. Make it sound dismissive, like "and if you sleep in a carton starting today, I couldn't care less."Long text. Anyway, hope this helps! Ty again! Also the Dutch words were a very nice addition! Loving me some ad-libs. Also that last line made me giggle. Baron might not be your most glorious role but you pack LOADS of Potential!
Oh wow, I did not expect such thorough feedback. Thanks so much for your thoughts and your kind words! I think I might give the character another try again then later, if only as an exercise for myself in incorporating direction. Either way, thanks again and good luck with the project! ^^ And if you ever need a fantasy nobleman, you know where to find me haha.