For some reason, this Diglett has the most unnecessary sass in his Voice and I am honestly unsure what to make of it. 😂 While I definitely get where you were trying to go here, you took a wrong turn while aiming for scared and instead went all the way to let me speak to anxietys manager.

If you have a Situation like the second line, imagine how it felt to sit like really uncomfortable for several hours and finally get to stretch out your feet again, for example. Where you still feel like everything is just cramped up AF. That is generally a big tip to consider. It can happen for various reasons that you don't get all the context beforehand while just Auditioning. So trying to really understand the Situation based on what you're given is a great skill to develop! :D

Other than that, on the more technical Side of things, your breaths are VERY audible, which is just meaning you are a little too close to the mic, and there are several little outside noises that really distract from your performance. Keep in mind that many people wont bother actually asking about the slight crackling and such in the BG. Thry just dismiss you. So getting that under control will help you a great deal. :)

Ty for your submission!