Operation: PGR Fandub Project
janoah for Commandant
The player character and leader of the Gray Raven squad. Graduated at the top of their class at FOS, they are one of the best commandants around for Babylonia. They are very supportive and caring towards their squadmates.
Because this is a player character, I’m open to male and female voices.
- english
- male adult
- female adult
- androgynous
- female teen
- male teen
(informative, slightly urgent) The Corrupted are still gathering this way…
(warm, sincere) I genuinely care about what you’re thinking. I don’t need a reason for that.
(authoritative) Gray Ravens, move out!
Thank you for your interest in the project! It was a lot of fun listening in to your Kamui, Camu, and Commandant auditions. You did a good job in trying to make them more livelier with adding in little laughs here and there, between the lively laughter for Kamui's greeting line as well as the amused almost mocking laughter for your Camu in the second lines. These were both nicely thought out. The other thing I really enjoyed about your performance is how you chose to do the whining line for Kamui as well, with having him sound like he's sobbing while whining. That had me laughing honestly and it was a fun performance! I can definitely hear that you had a lot of fun doing the performances between Kamui and Camu.
Just two things of note: I found that the Commandant voice was a little forced, specifically the ones giving orders and the informative line. I think because of the more forced voice, the second line -- the warmer voice -- came off more awkward and almost uncertain on how to comfort/assure the other in the line. Be mindful towards your own range. It's good to practice new voices and with some more practice with the voices, you'll eventually learn how to make it/use it more naturally! And I'm sure with time, you'll be able to perfect the voice you were going for in Commandant's audition.
Again, you were amazing direction wise and it was awesome to hear. If you'd like to try a retake on your Commandant with your natural voice or after some practice with the voice you were going for, I'd love to hear you give it another shot. Otherwise thanks so much for your interest and I hope to work with you soon!
Of course! Although I may not be home right this instant, i will submit a retake in trying to recreate commandant based on what your critiques are, I too felt the same opinion once listening to it again just now. As for the other auditions, thank you so much! I tried my best to make Camu and Kami have as much depth as possible with just their voice and based on your response, i’d like to assume I did just fine.
On the contrary, I thank you for your response! taking your time to do this is really appreciated and I do thank you for it. Thanks for the chance for giving the opportunity to me and others to audition! I hope to work with you soon as well! Again, thanks for your feedback and I hope all is well!