Heya and thank you! :)So, you got the Spirit, but you should try coming out of yourself more. ^^ Play around with the Lines and have fun! I am sure you had, but it feels like you were holding yourself back alot. :) Furthermore, your Microphone has alot of Static noise, which you should filter in the future, so it sounds alot cleaner. Depending on what you use, there are tutorials for that, so I heavily recommend that! :D Thanks for your time!