MONARCH - Sims 2 Film
savvygothprincess for Margaret Ballord - Minor Character
A closer friend than most royals to Eliza, though still distant. Margaret is empathetic toward the heiress in times of distress and genuinely attempts to cheer Eliza up in weary situations. Though the heiress does not fully appreciate her presence, Margaret is surely somewhere in the background to console Eliza whenever needed - whether welcomed or not.
[Any pitch; possibly Medium]
[Receptive, down-to-Earth, considerate]
[Caucasian]
Introduce yourself!
(concerned, upset, trying to help, voice wavering) Eliza, please, stop this. He is gone, and there… There is nothing you can do. We must move on, even if it pains us.
(hesitantly, careful) My princess, are you alright? You seem unlike yourself.
(smiling, gently) Well you appear to be in good spirits. Pray tell, your majesty, what has made you so ecstatic as of late?
Thank you for auditioning! Your voice is nice and soft, very pretty. I'm not sure if it was just the lines, or if it was your emotion, but the execution seemed slightly flat. I feel there could be more concern/worry behind your voice, and that would definitely help the lines feel more natural. Thank you again.
Thank you for the feedback, well noted on the emotion! Probably me trying to be more professional then sincere, I will work on that in the future :)