Elite: Dangerous Machinima Pilot Episode
ashleighaishwarya for CMDR Shaxley
CMDR Shaxley is 25 years old, but she's already made a name for herself among the few who know her exploits. She's a supporter of Felicia Winters in the lore who is the current Shadow President (ie. Opposition Leader) of the Federation. Shaxley is a strong believer in what she sees as Federation principles and ideals. She advocates diplomacy with the opposition powers, yet, she has a very strong combat history, having killed many enemies, which has given her an Elite rating in Combat in the lore, which is the highest one can have.
- 1. She kills when she believes it's justified.
- 2. She's not psychopathic, nor mechanical..
- 3. She puts aside her emotions but cites her values and ideals.
- 4. She speaks calmly and competently.
- 5. She's extremely professional.
This character is going to be an enigma to figure out, and should be fun.
Diplomacy is a crucial part of the Federation's identity. As long as Winters keeps applying political pressure, President Hudson has to see this as an option.
(formally, over radio) Capital Ship, this is CMDR Shaxley. Requesting special docking clearance, over.
(formally, to her acting superior) If you pardon me, CMDR, you have consistently valued two things: the mission, and human life, particularly those who have served under you. Those are Federation values. Those are Winters' values. I am behind you 100%.
Great take on the character. You really followed the directions. Nevertheless, I'd really like a second audition with a slight increase in both pitch and tempo. Shaxley should be less stiff and less formal-sounding. She should be more personable and more likable while still being professional.
Thank you! I will submit a second audition as soon as I can. :)