Ethereal - Sims Machinima Series
rattle zing for Leo Sano
One of the most well-liked guys in the university. Recently returned from a year hiatus. Really nice, outgoing, and caring on the outside, but inside he’s really broody and made of steel. Doesn’t really care much for Isla at first.
(friendly) Hey, let’s go out on my treat, instead! (walking away) It was nice to see you, Isla.
Line 2:
(cold/ no empathy) Oh, does it hurt? It’s just the hand you used to hurt Isla. Should I break it? … Don’t ever appear in front of me again.Line 3 :
(endearing) I didn’t know that I’d grow to like someone...or how frustrating and scary it could be. I just wanted to be with you always. I thought that all I needed was you by my side.
Feedback would be appreciated and I was actually wondering if you would be okay with me adding improv and giving the character more of a sarcastic tone for some of his lines. I did not do this in the audition but I feel like it would be a nice touch if you were interested.
You did a good job! And actually if you want to the improv go ahead, I actually imagined him with that kind of tone, where he's fake in some points but sarcastic but dark at the same time? If that makes sense. And also, if you would, Isla is pronounced as (eye-la) Thank you ~ !
Sorry about the miss pronunciation, I'll remember that for future reference if you pick me for the role.