Paradox Agent | Halo Reach Machinima Project
Bedomy for Desmond Bishop | ONI Intelligence Officer
ROLE - Supporting/Lead
CHARACTER - Desmond Bishop, an Intelligence Officer from ONI Section One. He is the commanding officer of his own Fireteam tasked to protect him and his interests.
BACKSTORY/PERSONALITY - Authoritative, honest, and odd. Unlike his predecessors, his goals are indefinite and mysterious. Not much is known about him, except for his loyal years of service and commandment of special operations.
- english
- male adult
- all american accents
- raspy
- Mid/Low-Range
- masculine
"Comms team, where is that beacon? I need an update ASAP. We don't have all day, so I would appreciate it if I got some goddamn intel". (Annoyed but keeping your cool, due to the lack of information regarding an interference from unknown tech).
"Whisper Company, you are to operate within a limited visual range above the precipice. Stay clear of enemy sight lines, assess the nature of our situation and report back to me". (Leading an operation that needs to go smoothly)
"Never in my life that I would see such a beautiful sight. To think all my years of traveling, I'd finally get to see her. Home". (Talking about Earth like you've never seen your home planet before).
I don't have any place in this project, just a voice actor giving my thoughts: - You have a nice clear voice, and its strength is delivering what sounds like factual intel dialogue. However, it can be double edge, you'll need to be aware of areas that require some weight to the words here and there, or you'll sound too monotoned. Example being : "Goddamn intel" you needed something there for the audience to have a hint of how long you've been waiting, or how tense the moment is. - Your pronunciation needs work when you start to speed up. This is a typical thing all people need to work on. Tongue twisters always help with this, you need the clear ending sounds of your words for people to hear the words you're saying. Hope this helps, best to you.
Thank you :)I'll try to work on the pronunciation to the best of my abilities.Thank you again for the help and hope we meet again on another project *bows*