This feedback goes for all of your auditions, since I didn't want to spam your notifications. Seeing as how you're starting off with acting, my critiques are mainly things you can get better on with time. For example, you seem to be falling into a beginners trap with auditions which is "reading" your lines, instead of acting them. I've had this issue with a bunch of my friends back in College where cold reading was their weak point. Try to imagine yourself in the scenario of the line, walk around, pretend to talk to someone, these are methods you can try to help you get into the groove of it. Also, your mic quality leaves a lot to be desired, are you using your phone? With a little audio editing the background noise isn't too much of an issue, but try to limit it. One technique I did starting out was recording under the thick covers of my bed, which 9 times out of 10 work. I do encourage you to try out for the BlazBlue roster as well. Even if you aren't cast, I can see the potential in you, so give it your all!