MONARCH - Sims 2 Film
ismelindsey for ♔Eliza Taylor♔ - Main Character (Protagonist)
The beautiful young heiress of Antonia. She is rather naive, which causes her to be accidentally mischievous in many situations. Her close friend is Atticus. She does not appreciate most royal company and prefers speaking with the commoners inside the kingdom.
♔British or Irish accent suggested♔
[Low-Medium to Medium-High pitch]
[Rebellious, sweet, loving, naive]
[Caucasian; lesbian]
Introduce yourself!
(hesitantly, sadly, adoring near the end) They mustn't see us. You need to hurry. We will meet again, I promise you.
(stoic, with a touch of anger behind it) Say as you must, but I will perish before I turn into a monster such as the likes of you.
(screaming, desperate, crying out) Let go of her! Stop, s-stop it! GET YOUR HANDS OFF OF- *break into sobs*
(filled with anguish) You have killed me. There is nothing to heal what you have done. I never want to see your face again. Leave me at once, or I will have you thrown from this kingdom.
Thank you for your audition! I love your natural voice, and it honestly fits Eliza rather well. The British accent is a little too unnatural though. Aside from your voice, your emotion could be improved. You seemed to be reading rather than acting the lines. Placing yourself in the character's situation can really help force yourself to put emotion into the lines. Your emotion also seemed rather abrupt, and too dramatic at points. Try smoothing it out and sprinkling it over the line instead of in one place, and it'll help the natural flow. Try practicing control over your voice, and you'll improve automatically with practice. Thank you again.
Thank you. I really appreciate the tips :)