P4GR: Central Cast
Alex Bui for Yosuke Hanamura
Second-in-command of the Investigation Team. He acts as the antithesis to Yu's quiet demeanor, being a very loud and rambunctious character who speaks out much more but is often concerned about the wrong things. Unlike Yu, who has notable talent, Yosuke lacks such characteristics and often finds himself the subject of jokes that point out this fact.
I don't want an impression of Yuri Lowenthal, but I would like a voice that fits Yosuke's established character. But if you do want to do the impression, here's a link for reference.
"I knew it wasn't lying, but I was so ashamed I didn't want to admit it. You're me, and I'm you. When you get down to it, all of this is me."
"Whoa, you can cook? Well, you do seem good with your hands- . . . Um. Never mind."
"Distance doesn't matter to us! Even if we're separated, we're still friends!"
I like that you took to giving a lighter tone of voice to signify that you are playing Yosuke (a nod to the japanese actor, though it probably wasn't intentional). Despite that, though, I feel your take of him feels very tensed. A more relaxed and free-flow approach would leave plenty of wiggle room for some of the very emotionally diverse scenes starring Yosuke.