I actually really liked this read, my only feedback, would be that it did fall into a single range and didn't really vary all that much, though that could have been the intention with this read so I cant say its bad its just what it is. I liked how it didn't seem to have much of a sing songy nature though, twas a personal worry when I did my takes.

I like the peppy take you did for this. It was a good read and pretty much everything sounded great. My only criticism is the first line. Something about the delivery of "Get Connected" sounded weird at first. Perhaps more variation in tone could be used there?

I wanted to hold off on critiquing myself until other people had to avoid affecting their critiques. That said, I did notice I had the same break rhythm in "trainers, educators, and potential employers" as I did in "February 8th from 10am to 4 at the Brisby Hall in Thornton," completely by accident. And though I didn't notice it, ThrillerJunkie was right, the Get Connected! sounds a bit awkward to me. I think it had the right idea with separating and accentuating it, I think I just delivered it weird. That said, I think the "with a free lunch!" was delivered with good excitement, and you can definitely hear my smile farther into it, which helps me to sound excited about it.