Good job pacing yourself! It can be super easy to fall into a trap of pronoucning your words quickly in this read, especially at the tongue-twister sections, so keep that up. Your pronunciations were a bit off at times with the locations (I actually think it was just Rhuddlan), so watch out for that. I like the emphasis, it feels like the beginning of a strength that you have, but it doesn't have the energy that would really enhance it. Combine that emphasis with some more passion! Overall, this was a phenomenal read.