Blazblue: Central Fiction English Dub
inserters telements for Carl Clover (New)
Carl Clover is a hyper-intelligent, yet obsessively overprotective type of person, especially when it comes to his older sister. He constantly thinks adults look down on him, even with his older friends, a paranoia that makes him mentally unstable later down the line. He's quick to anger if you insult his sister or mention his father, but can be civil when dealing with the latter, even holding normal conversations. Overtime, however, in his quest to bring his sister back to normal, he slowly begins to lose his sanity, even agreeing with his sociopathic father on how he views other humans.
https://youtu.be/Z4oKBQERihA?t=148 Here's an example of the voice, though it doesn't have to be 1:1
(defeated) Even if someone managed to get that far, so long as Miss Noel retains her designation as the Eye, nobody would be able to override her observation.
(A beat, followed by a serious tone) …That is, unless she were to die… Then it wouldn't matter anymore.
(Quickly losing his cool) What the heck is wrong with you? I gave you an order, Nirvana! Kill her! KILL HER! Why aren't you listening to me?!
(Bluntly) I don’t know how you know me -- or Ada, for that matter, but you’re spouting absolute nonsense! My sister is very sick, and only the Azure Grimoire can save her. This doll is the tool I’ll be using to help me find it.
I can see the attempt here, and it IS there, but there are a good few things I would fix1) The delivery of certain lines come off as flat, particularly the second line as it sounds as if you're reading the line but not acting the line if that makes sense.
2) You ignored punctuation. The reads come off rushed and the emotion is lost when commas, ellipses and beats are ignored. For example, on line 3, "I don't know how you know me--or Ada, for that matter, but you're spouting absolute nonsense!", you read it as "I don't know how you know me or Ada for that matter, but you're spouting absolute nonsense." I know it's hard to get an idea of what I mean only based off of text, but having breaks in a sentence keeps it from being so casual, and you didn't yell when there was an exclamation point, making the emotion calm and dismissive rather than annoyed and angry.3) There was a lot of buzzing and background noise in the recording. Normally I can edit that kind of stuff out, but for an audition, that's something you'd want to do on your own.4) Edit out any flubbed attempts. It's fine if you already have the role, but when auditioning, you don't want to appear sloppy as it heavily hurts your chances. I know you submitted this a while ago, and I'm sorry for only getting to it now, but I would like you to try again on the new casting call page I've published. If you take all of my feedback to heart, I think you may further blossom the budding voice you have here.