Great job! Great emotion! I love your take on her voice. I have a few notes for that last little monologue. I didn't include this for simplicity sake but I feel if you took it into consideration, it would enhance your already strong performance. What's happening in that scene is that Em is at gunpoint. Gran and Ari have water guns and surprise surprise, someone gets her face partially melted off. That's what the end screeching is. Also the transitions in that monologue where the dashes are is where she interrupts herself. She's trying to appeal to the rational sides of her assailants. When Ari appears, she's exasperated by the fact that the one she thought was sane is also trying to kill her. And then after Christ sake Granite mumbles that Ari isn't the monster here. There should be a beat there, where Em takes that in. I want you to react to that as though someone who has been nothing but terrible to you is saying that you're worse than they are using a word that you've been labeled with your whole life. The best kind of acting comes from what you feel, so just try that. Thanks for taking the time to audition, I appreciate your efforts.