Super clear, solid ending. I could learn a lot from how you get your breaths in.

Good job on this performance! I especially like how you changed up your tone of voice and added emphasis to words that I wasn't quite expecting; it added a very unique feeling to your take! Overall, I would say your pacing was fine, but at times you would speed up when you should have kept it more consistently steady. That way, your articulation would have more opportunities to shine. Overall, the energy is nice (maybe just a teensy bit more?) but more focus on articulation through a slower read would help a lot. Keep at it, nice job!