So much emotion in your crying, I love it, and I don't say that weakly! I can hear a mild hum in your background during that line though which is odd because it's absent during the laughing and the joke lines(this is not enormous issue). I found your laughing quite funny, not exactly the kind of laugh I was expecting but in recording with guidance I'm sure you could manage it no problem. I liked your joke a lot too! Delivery was nice but together I feel we could make it great. Come back here on the 10th and we'll see if you get the part.