Sonic the Hedgehog: Mobius 25 Years Later (166 and 167)
Zilla for Knuckles the Echidna
Knuckles is Lara-Su's father and also fakes Sonic's arrest, only to set him free at the beginning of issue 167. He is a stern, but concerned father towards Lara-Su.
(Proud and complimenting his daughter's achievement) "You're doing great, Lara-Su. I wasn't nearly this good at your age."
(Stern at first, but more fatherly toward the "Please") "Go wash up. I'll meet you back home. NOW Lara-Su... please."
(Genuinely scared and worried, but glad to see Lara-Su is alright, and hinting at pride) "Lara-Su! Are you alright? You're mother is going to flip! but, she will be so proud, you've been amazing!"
A fine attempt, but I actually think your Sonic is better! There were points when it sounded fine, but I think it sounds again forced to sound deep. However, it's hard to switch tones. :)