GREAT SLATE - love it. Thanks for giving me something a little different each time and yet it's fun and alive and lets me know - this person knows what they are doing and having some fun! Ok love that you're playing with this kind of character. What I would do though is add some weird traits to the character so it doesn't just sound like a woman putting on a manly deep voice. You're playing well with the character, but this kind of character can afford some really wonky unpredictable moments so that they lift off the page even more. He could be JOWLY and spitty so it adds more unique quality. Laugh could be a bit more organic for the character. SO just some NUANCES and some unpredictable weird approaches to some of the words. Kind of the same direction on the second one - good character voice but it's in a similar place so it needs more actionable choices or fun choices to lift it off the page a bit. Second passing was much more lively and had more movement as a decision maker, I would love hearing the transition from this CHARACTER to the realistic character to follow. With otter 2 - I would just add another type of choice on the second last line so the scene moves just a bit there but I liked this second passing for sure. The other thing to consider is that this is supposed to be the SAME PERSON basically but with an evil side so the person who is going to nail this audition is someone who will showcase that this is the same character with multiple personality basically. So that's the other gem to consider with this kind of direction