Great reading! Your volume is great, especially with your voice being rough from screaming at the cross country meet.

No worries at all! I like that you were doing your best to bring energy to your take, despite the fact that your voice was rough. Just remember that taking care of your voice is #1, so if it's ever feeling rough, you can always submit your homework or auditions whenever it is feeling better. But yeah, my feedback for you is to project more from your gut. You're doing well bringing energy, but now use your ENTIRE body to FILL up the imaginary auditorium you are standing in front of. Keep honing in on your articulation and breathing, and you will quickly improve in those already-solid areas as well. Very nice job!