I really like the fullness and volume of your voice! It sounds like you're reading from a script, but that's not entirely what this homework was about. Great job on projection and clarity!

You have a great voice! The deep nature of it is calming in a way, and I think you could fit a wide variety of roles. I think the main aspect of VO you should hone into is the authentic nature of a read like this. This felt like you were reading me a newspaper article instead of selling me a product. To help this, practice using your entire body to raise your energy level and bring the heat in your projection. If you slowed down a bit, this would also help with your clarity and breathing. Overall though, great stuff, keep it up!