Very well done! Your annunciation was great!

Well done! I would recommend slowing it down JUST a bit to fine tune your articulation. Your clarity was overall solid, but it did feel like your words were mushing together at times. Also, this felt a bit too conversational for a sales-person type script. Instead, loosen up and use your entire body to really bring the heat in your energy! Also, near the end, you REALLY ramped up the pacing at one point, at it felt a bit out of place. But yeah, overall, this was a hard read but you nailed it. Just a bit more work and fine tuning. Great stuff.