I really liked your tone! It gave off such a clean sales ad voice! I also liked your pacing.

Great job on this read! Your pacing was solid. My only real critique is the number of small breaths you take throughout the read. Sometimes you breathe before and after every major word, which only impacts your take. Remember to pause and take big breaths from the gut when necessary! Also, be careful not to let your pace increase and decrease too much. It's better to have one, solid and consistent pace. Aside from all of that, your articulation was fantastic and I liked your energy. Nice work!