I really like the sound of your voice! I think you did a good job with your tone fluctuations. It made the "sale" sound more intriguing.

You have a very nice voice! The articulation and style of your take felt very professional. My feedback for you is to raise your energy level. I know you weren't going for a super high-energy read, but I still believe that by increasing your projection even a little, the character of your voice will be even more fun. Sometimes you had a LOT of energy, while at other times it felt a bit more flat. But this was great, keep it up!