Listening to your voice, I was immediately reminded of network provider/toothpaste commercials. Meaning to say, whatever you're selling, I'm definitely buying. Great work on this! Side note: One tiny thing, during the "No fuss, no muss" part, I think your voice trembled a bit. Just gotta keep the same level of confidence throughout the recording. Despite that, you still did amazing though. I can't wait to see your future auditions!

Hey Jaime! This was SUCH a clean read. Nice and steady, articulate, and professional. Excellent job. You had a lot of character in your voice, but I would say you could add just a bit more! Perhaps by increasing your energy just a bit, although that could interfere with the style you were trying to go for, so either way works. Also, make sure each breath you take is intentional, as there was one breath near the end that seemed out of place during a long sentence. I know it's hard not to pause and breathe, but it's better to intentionally stop, take a big breath, and then continue as opposed to randomly intaking breath. Your breathing was on-point with the rest of it, though. That's honestly my only mild criticism, this was a joy to listen to! Keep up the fantastic work!