Homework: Week 1 (VA101-A)
Jaytsu for Role for Homework: Week 1 (VA101-A)
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Good stuff man, missing a bit more projection & breath support though I know you said you were recovering. I'd say try to really find words to really sell people on. like try emphasizing the times where it says "free" or "no cost". You & I both know what we wanna hear if we're listening to an ad on TV. But overall it was good. You got this!
Good insights, I appreciate it! I definitely should have spent more time thinking about what the script is trying to do/say/sell, rather than just being able to read and pronounce the words as they are. I'll keep that in mind moving forward, thank you!
Hey George! Great read, although I would recommend working on taking bigger breaths instead of many shallow breaths scattered throughout the read. From what I'm hearing, some sentences go something like: "Low rates (breath) friendly service (breath) name brands..." etc. If you work on this and slow down just a bit, your articulation will also improve (although it felt just fine in this read). Aside from that, project! I know you were sick so don't worry about pushing yourself, but don't forget to bring as much energy as you can for your next submission (unless it is out of place, of course). Great work, George!
Awesome, thank you for the feedback! I think, listening back to it and comparing how I felt at the time of recording, I didn't even REALIZE all the shallow breaths I was taking mid-sentence. Slowing down, breathing bigger, and pushing energy are gonna be on my list of things to improve on!